The two minute movie we made being viewed.

Today I had 5 of my friends viewing the beginning of our groups film; here are some of their comments.

Improvements that could have been made:

1 The acting of the cut man was bad due to the fact that even though he had just woken up after sleeping on the ground, he was fine he had a bit of a limp but he was climbing fine; walking on unstable terrain, his acting skills made it obvious that he was fine even though he had an apparent cut head.

2 If we had more time it would have been better if we could tighten one or two points of the film.

3 In parts it was a bit slow.

4 In one of the dialect parts it can’t be clearly heard.

5 It could have been better if there was the person's perspective; maybe a running scene.

Good parts which really work with the film:

1 The voice of the psychopath is very effective because it adds more depth to the film and gives a mystery to the film if he has attacked him or going to.

2 The music adds effect and drama to the piece

3 The different range of camera shots makes the film good.

4 The location works well.

5 The makeup looks good

6 The music works well with what you are seeing.

Would you change the location?

1 The place where this was filmed was out of the way and was too far to travel.

2 You could have maybe filmed inside instead of outside with unnatural light as the weather can be unpredictable.

By Connor Gallagher